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how do you have 3 stars?! you put no effort in this.

mr-johnson22 responds:

Answers to questions:
1) Clock Day
2) Yes.

1. get flash its worth it, sorry but its true
2. you have a tablet but you animations will never be good unless you put more effort into them
3. once you made an animation in flash get a preloader from community>downloads>flash loaders
4. don't publish until your work is working properly
5. read the book Richard Williams - The Animator's Survival Kit
6. just take your time to make a good animation

animation was ok but 1. export better sound 2. it needed to be longer.

Jaffre responds:

1. I don't know exactly what you mean. Vell, maybe I missed something when I uploaded it.
2. O'rly? It was a test but I spent way too much time on it to not show it.
Thanks anyvay.

this isn't animation. you had very good voice acting and the script was a 3/5.

ivysly responds:

i have lost faith in humanity's sense of humor
i wasn't trying to animate the joke is that it's terrible and i'm surprised i've even lasted this long

you need to improve you art, add sound, improve animation, add a plot, and put more effort in telling your work.

YES! sue tips: the audio is a bit echoey and fixing that would make a difference. the quality for it is good tho. try rotoscopeing the video at the end instead of the quality changing. this was very funny!

this was a really funny but i have a few tips on the animation. the first part "this is fricking awesome didn't need to be there and you should move the arms and such using frame by frame animation. try to draw the body outline with more detail like adding hands and such. you need to overall just improve on animation fluency without Tweens and your art. your style reminds me of early lazypillow and i like your plot.

Cheetoh responds:

I know. I do a lot of frame by fame work. This was lousey on purpose, and, it doesn't really have a plot. Thanks for the review

this was grate and some work points have been said but one thing i noticed is that you used a shape tween to tween to completely different things and i think that part was a bit lazy. also some things where well drawn but others where scribbled. i think you need to do more frame by frame stuff because it seems choppy and lip sync is the most choppy. in all next time use less tweens and shape tweens for color changes only. i still loved this.

I LOVED THIS. i think the plot was amazing and this was really high quality animation. i really want to see a sequel. just wondering how long did it take you to make this? this animation is deep and i loved the way you chose to animate this.

you used wayyyyyyyyyyyy to many tweens. next time don't use a shape tween for things like the laptop and don't uses the bone tool so much you can't be lazy with animation you'll have to draw more frames. the plot was grate. lip-syncing was bad you need to show the different shapes of the mouth for every sound.

i made this page for animations i make but i also make videos.

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