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how do you have 3 stars?! you put no effort in this.

mr-johnson22 responds:

Answers to questions:
1) Clock Day
2) Yes.

1. get flash its worth it, sorry but its true
2. you have a tablet but you animations will never be good unless you put more effort into them
3. once you made an animation in flash get a preloader from community>downloads>flash loaders
4. don't publish until your work is working properly
5. read the book Richard Williams - The Animator's Survival Kit
6. just take your time to make a good animation

animation was ok but 1. export better sound 2. it needed to be longer.

Jaffre responds:

1. I don't know exactly what you mean. Vell, maybe I missed something when I uploaded it.
2. O'rly? It was a test but I spent way too much time on it to not show it.
Thanks anyvay.

you need to improve you art, add sound, improve animation, add a plot, and put more effort in telling your work.

YES! sue tips: the audio is a bit echoey and fixing that would make a difference. the quality for it is good tho. try rotoscopeing the video at the end instead of the quality changing. this was very funny!

I LOVED THIS. i think the plot was amazing and this was really high quality animation. i really want to see a sequel. just wondering how long did it take you to make this? this animation is deep and i loved the way you chose to animate this.

you used wayyyyyyyyyyyy to many tweens. next time don't use a shape tween for things like the laptop and don't uses the bone tool so much you can't be lazy with animation you'll have to draw more frames. the plot was grate. lip-syncing was bad you need to show the different shapes of the mouth for every sound.

i made this page for animations i make but i also make videos.

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