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happymushroom

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its wonderful animation and its a good loop but you shouldent upload loops to new grounds. next time make a longer movie. you have potential so use it.

theres no animation. this should be on youtube and the audio portal. not here

wonderful chiptune and if it was in the audio portal it would have gotten a 5/5 but this is the movie portal and this is only a 2 frame loop. next time put more effort into the animation next time.

codekk responds:

It is now in the audio section.

stranges crossover i ever saw.

1. you put in the wrong aspect ratio o newgrounds so there are white bars on the sides. 2. you need to export with better jpeg quality (google it of you dont know what im talking about) becouse the qualaty was bad. 3. sense the only animation was keyframes you should spend more time fixing them them look better. sometimes faster movements are better (like when Mario jumped) 4. add a newgrounds preloader. 5. just spend more time on your stuff.

the most important thing i have to say is next time have a preloader. newgrounds has a free one that you just need to copy onto the first frame. the title was a bit too short to read. the last thing is altho the animation was good i think next time you should be a bit more creative. a rock falling on his head is not that funny, its been done before.

NoahBHS responds:

I know it's not that funny or anything, I practice animation every day, and I decided to release this so people can tell me what to work on.

the animation was fine (a bit choppy though) but the sound was bad and it was too short. when you upload to newgrounds it has to be longer if you want a better rating. next time add a soundtrack, make it longer, export at better sound quality, and don't make it loop.

this shouldn't be upload onto new grounds

i loved this but the onley thing i found wrong with it was the art quality. now that your moving to flash i dont think that will be a problem. so good job!

Archewally responds:

thank you!

i cant describe how mutch i liked this. the animation looked good and i love the voice acting. the storyline is wonderful. i think sometimes the mouth when people where talking kinda drifted and the lines needed to be cleaned up. you should ask to beta test the video player for new grounds. then you could upload a better quality video (like have hd blurs and stuff) and it will load faster. also then you could use things like after effects and HD graphics. anyway i loved this

i made this page for animations i make but i also make videos.

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